Are these Limericks, pt.1?

If so, please let me know if you like any of them. I'm thinking about submitting some to a school magazine...

Old People

I閳ユ獡 lucky I閳ユ獡 Still alive!

Why do they still let you drive?

Your hair has all grayed,

Your vision has swayed,

They should just keep you inside.

My Panda

My panda is black and white.

He puts up a real tough fight.

The last one to try

Is not still alive

And that man was twice your height.

Cozy

Inside I may do as I please,

Outside it is zero degrees.

It閳ユ獨 nice to be in

I閳ユ獓 say with a grin

If only I had my keys.

Diet

Hungry, hungry hippo,

You eat but never grow.

A plastic ball

No carbs at all

Your diet works, you know!

Baseball

A cool and shady summer day,

A day when baseball players play,

You swing the bat,

And just like that

My window閳ユ獨 gone, you閳ユ獟l pay! (Shakes fist angrily)

Are these Limericks, pt.1?

I know poetry very well, and I'd say that every single one is a limerick besides "my panda". the lines "The last one to try Is not still alive" doesn't rhyme, but it's still a good poem anyway. I like "Baseball" because at the end you add *shakes fist angrily* it adds a nice touch.

Are these Limericks, pt.1?

ha! ha! those are really cute. yeah, these are limericks. but, I'll have to agree with the other girl, My Panda isn't one. but it's still cute! my favorite is...Old People. that one is so funny. well... they are all funny, but, i love that one!

Are these Limericks, pt.1?

Yes they are my friend

and very great ones at that,

submit away %26lt;3